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Showing posts with label writing draft. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing draft. Show all posts

Thursday, April 25, 2013

When NOT to Start the Book With Conflict

Who Brings A Knife To A Gun Fight?
Who Brings A Knife To A Gun Fight? (Photo credit: Cayusa)
Actually, I can think of some downsides to opening a first chapter with conflict. The reader won't care about the character unless the type of conflict is chosen carefully because the reader won't know the character enough to really care. To combat this, I'd use the conflict to say something about the character. But what about the initial hook? Use suspense, tension, reader curiosity, mystery, just long enough to set up character before diving into the conflict.
Some types of conflict are rarely effective as an opening hook because most books (except sequels) start with the reader knowing nothing about the characters, issues, or world. And the opening hook makes promises to the reader about what kind of book they are about to read. So avoid starting in the middle of a conflict that is...
  • Character-dependent.
  • setting-dependent
  • back-story-dependent
  • different type of action than typical
  • different mood than typical
  • no connection to main issues

Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Working with an Absent Antagonist

Day Thirty-eight: Skulking
Day Thirty-eight: Skulking (Photo credit: mbshane)
The book opens when the protagonist finds recent signs of the monster she has been hunting. The creature is nearby but does not actually appear until the next scene. Who is her main opponent? The creature. Where is it? Not here.
Scenes of pursuit and flight are perhaps the most common examples of absent antagonists. And thrillers are not the only books where the antagonist is not present. Maybe the protagonist is his/her own antagonist. How does the writer keep the reader involved when a direct confrontation just is not possible? Here are some techniques:
  • Develop the sense of danger. She knows it is out there but not exactly where so it could appear at any time. Show destruction previously caused by the antagonist and hint at what it could do to the protagonist.
  • Develop the sense of uncertainty. Not only could it appear at any time and from any direction, she's never actually seen the creature. Let her imagination run wild.
  • Make the mood forbidding. Plants rustle without a wind. Sour smell from the burned out den. Lack of magic where there should be lots. No wildlife moving. Add what could be a bad omen. Skin prickles. Imagine that ghosts or some part of the setting is trying to warn her of danger.
  • State fears/ worries/ uncertainties from the protagonist's POV. If she is unsure of her success, the reader will worry too.
  • Set a time limit. The protagonist has to find the creature now before there are more victims and before someone else gets involved.
  • Have someone warn her of the danger. Have someone warn her of the worst case outcome – the one that happens or one that is similar to what happens.

Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Biting the bullet

Culled paper
Culled paper (Photo credit: Dvortygirl)
After two days of hemming and hawing I decided to rewrite this chapter from scratch, too. Technically, it isn't from scratch. When I rewrite a chapter in this draft, I reuse the summary and incorporate new notes then fill in the gaps. But most the words I keep are new. (can't keep the summary) My writing friend who I met with today agrees that the two chapters I have rewritten this way read much better. I just might do all my chapters like this. It might be faster and produce a better product. Just wish I had thought of this strategy earlier. Guess I'm still learning. Someday this will be my first draft instead of my second.

Do you find your job is still a learning experience?

Tuesday, April 16, 2013

8 Kinds of Awful Writing Advice by Susan K. Perry

1. Advice that demoralizes you. One young poet despaired when a teacher told her to put her poems in a drawer for ten years before sending them out. That advice plays into a paralyzing perfectionism. You can usually manage to see your words through fresh eyes in only a few days or weeks.
2Advice that limits your potential.  Could it be true, as a novelist once wrote, that if you’ve left a novel unfinished for a few years, you may as well forget about it?  Not if your passion for project is still there or can be resurrected.
3Advice that cramps your imagination.  Should you only write from your own point of view or about a group to which you belong?  No, that’s too rigid.  Great fiction has been written from the point of view of the opposite gender or from another era or culture. It’s all about pretending.
4. Advice suggesting that what works for you is nonetheless wrong. One novelist worried when told it was best to “Get the story out first, then polish.” His own method was to polish each section before moving on. That worked for him because he never became paralyzed by obsessing over every minor detail to the detriment of making any progress at all.
5. Advice that’s more market-oriented than you are. You may often hear, “Anticipate what the audience wants and then give it to them.” While that has worked well for some authors, others can’t create at all if they’re not pursuing their passions. There’s a time to focus on whether your work is the best it can be for reaching the audience you have in mind. But to prematurely zero in on what you think “they” want can be inhibiting.
6Advice that’s impossible to follow. My favorite example of this is “Don’t think.” I, for one, can’t write from my toes, elbows, or even my heart. The trick, of course, is to take this less literally, and to learn to think in more inclusive ways than the usual grocery-list-compiling way.
7Crazy-making advice. Examples: “Read everything,” or its reverse, “Don’t read at all when you’re writing.” Obviously one can’t read everything, even in a particular genre. Focusing on junk leaves little time for the good stuff. I like to immerse myself in the kind of work I’d like to produce myself.  As I read so many books, I’m not worried about imitating someone’s voice.
8Advice that insists there’s only one correct way to write, propose, query, or submit your work.  Should you always avoid adverbs? Never use the passive voice? Never start a sentence with “there are”? Every one of these “rules” is broken constantly by top writers. And while there are established formats for query letters, nonfiction book proposals, and novel synopses, for every successful sale based on those formats, there are numerous exceptions.
(Source: blogs.psychcentral.com)