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Thursday, April 25, 2013

When NOT to Start the Book With Conflict

Who Brings A Knife To A Gun Fight?
Who Brings A Knife To A Gun Fight? (Photo credit: Cayusa)
Actually, I can think of some downsides to opening a first chapter with conflict. The reader won't care about the character unless the type of conflict is chosen carefully because the reader won't know the character enough to really care. To combat this, I'd use the conflict to say something about the character. But what about the initial hook? Use suspense, tension, reader curiosity, mystery, just long enough to set up character before diving into the conflict.
Some types of conflict are rarely effective as an opening hook because most books (except sequels) start with the reader knowing nothing about the characters, issues, or world. And the opening hook makes promises to the reader about what kind of book they are about to read. So avoid starting in the middle of a conflict that is...
  • Character-dependent.
  • setting-dependent
  • back-story-dependent
  • different type of action than typical
  • different mood than typical
  • no connection to main issues

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